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#621 julie54

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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:29 PM

I bet she does!


Ok. It's because your young. My old brain takes longer. Lol but I have a picture at last !!!

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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:30 PM

I went back over Eva/Gideon's timeline to figure out the timing for where Corrine's timing figured in ....

 

From the Monday evening that Eva and Gideon met in the Crossfire lobby to the Thursday evening that Entwined wrapped up, 59 days passed - about two months, -- eight and a half weeks.

 

"Four months pregnant" meaning in the fourth month could cover anything from the start of week 12 to the end of week 16. For this example, I'm going to go with the low end -- 12 weeks -- because Corrine, who was a slender woman, was not yet showing.

 

If these numbers work, then:

  • Corrine would have been around 4-5 weeks along when Gideon met Eva. Corrine learned about Eva's existence on day 6 (the night of the advocacy center dinner, when Gideon talked to Corrine after the date-gone-badly was over.) It's possible she didn't yet know she was pregnant.
  • It was day 17 that Corrine became desperate enough to crash the fundraiser where she started chasing Gideon in person in New York. So we're talking 6-7 weeks along, in her second month. Perhaps she did know by then, and that's why she threw all caution to the wind to try to get Gideon back as quickly as possible. This was around the time, too, if she became Dr. Anne Lucas' patient, so I'm actually going to give Corrine the benefit of the doubt.
  • Day 28 is when Gideon started "dating" Corrine again. She's definitely 8+ weeks along now. She had to have known by then she was pregnant, I believe. If she knew exactly how far along she was, she knew she needed to seduce Gideon as soon as possible to trap him into marrying her while she was still pregnant, passing off the child as his and by the time the baby was born "too early" they'd already be married, and no way would Gideon throw her out to raise a child alone. .
  • Somewhere between day 42 and 44 is when Gideon cut Corrine off. She was now in definitely somewhere into her third month, and having failed to seduce Gideon by now, it's already too late to simply get him into bed and then trick him that he'd knocked her up the very first time. She'd start showing soon, so there's no way he would buy her being newly-pregnant.
  • Day 57 is when Corrine took the pills.


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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:30 PM

He did .... because I think that's the "official line" the cops were feeding his high-power lawyers.

 

Meanwhile, Eva was fed the line the investigation was being dropped entirely, Graves and her partner together decided to bury the whole thing.

 

Obviously, Graves and her partner still were working the case. So the drop-the-case was a lie. I have a feeling the not-a-suspect also was a lie, perhaps to an attempt to lull Gideon into a false sense of security.

 

Gideon knew better than to fall for that trap. He's still be uber careful -- look at the extreme measures he took to shake off any tail that might have been following him and Eva to the airport the weekend they went away to the Caribbean.

 

He's now become willing to risk openly going back to Eva, but I think only because as long as the dead gangster remains an alternate suspect, there's no way a prosecutor would dare take the case to trial. He hasn't totally relaxed his guard yet, though. Smart man.

 

Sometimes he's a smart man :) Other times you just want to shake him.



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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:32 PM

He did .... because I think that's the "official line" the cops were feeding his high-power lawyers.
 
Meanwhile, Eva was fed the line the investigation was being dropped entirely, Graves and her partner together decided to bury the whole thing.
 
Obviously, Graves and her partner still were working the case. So the drop-the-case was a lie. I have a feeling the not-a-suspect also was a lie, perhaps to an attempt to lull Gideon into a false sense of security.
 
Gideon knew better than to fall for that trap. He's still be uber careful -- look at the extreme measures he took to shake off any tail that might have been following him and Eva to the airport the weekend they went away to the Caribbean.
 
He's now become willing to risk openly going back to Eva, but I think only because as long as the dead gangster remains an alternate suspect, there's no way a prosecutor would dare take the case to trial. He hasn't totally relaxed his guard yet, though. Smart man.

I agree. As he said at the beginning, He doesn't want to insult the cops intelligence. He still has to watch himself.

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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:32 PM

Hey LN-did you ever figure out how many chapters had sex scenes?



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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:32 PM

I've been wondering why so many people are complaining about the cliffhanger ending. I didn't consider the ending a cliffhanger. I'm thinking perhaps people are concerned about Eva's trip to SD and that's why they consider it a cliffy? Do we really think that Eva would cheat on Gideon?

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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:36 PM

I've been wondering why so many people are complaining about the cliffhanger ending. I didn't consider the ending a cliffhanger. I'm thinking perhaps people are concerned about Eva's trip to SD and that's why they consider it a cliffy? Do we really think that Eva would cheat on Gideon?


I didn't think of it as a cliffhanger, but as a continuance of the story. and no she won't cheat on Gideon. They mean to much to each other.

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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:36 PM

Ok. It's because your young. My old brain takes longer. Lol but I have a picture at last !!!

 

Yay Julie! :) 



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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:38 PM

I didn't think of it as a cliffhanger, but as a continuance of the story. and no she won't cheat on Gideon. They mean to much to each other.

 

Yea I agree with you I dont think its a cliffhanger and I dont think she will cheat on Gideon, she f***** up once with the kiss she's smart enough not to do it again! 



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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:44 PM

Yea I agree with you I dont think its a cliffhanger and I dont think she will cheat on Gideon, she f***** up once with the kiss she's smart enough not to do it again!

She is learning to think before reacting. Like she did with the prenup. She saw it, rather than react, she had a shower, and came back to it.

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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:46 PM

She is learning to think before reacting. Like she did with the prenup. She saw it, rather than react, she had a shower, and came back to it.

 

I was so proud of her for doing that! I must say when I read that it was a prenup I was like oh uh here we go and then she completely surprised me! 



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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:49 PM

Hey LN-did you ever figure out how many chapters had sex scenes?

 

Um, not yet .... honestly, I think the time I just spent figuring out the timeline of Corrine's pregnancy could have been better spent with Gideon/Eva sexy time counting. Soooooo

 

Chapter

1 - foreplay

2 - sex

3 - sex

4 - nope

5 - sex

6 - sex

7 - sex

8 - sex

9 - nightclub sex ;)

10 - nope

11 - nope

12 - sex

13 - nope

14 - nope

15 - sex

16 - nope

17 - sex

18 - plane sex (oh baby)

19 - sex

20 - married sex in the office (so hot)

21 - nope

22 - sex

23 - end with a kiss that's going somewhere ....

 

So 14 out of 22 chapters.



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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:52 PM

They sure were busy having lots of it LN! 



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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:53 PM

Um, not yet .... honestly, I think the time I just spent figuring out the timeline of Corrine's pregnancy could have been better spent with Gideon/Eva sexy time counting. Soooooo

 

Chapter

1 - foreplay

2 - sex

3 - sex

4 - nope

5 - sex

6 - sex

7 - sex

8 - sex

9 - nightclub sex ;)

10 - nope

11 - nope

12 - sex

13 - nope

14 - nope

15 - sex

16 - nope

17 - sex

18 - plane sex (oh baby)

19 - sex

20 - married sex in the office (so hot)

21 - nope

22 - sex

23 - end with a kiss that's going somewhere ....

 

So 14 out of 22 chapters.

 

You crack me up. I guessed 6 out of 23-felt like a lot to me ;D



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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:53 PM

They sure were busy having lots of it LN! 

 

Gideon had been saving it up for weeks!!!



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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:54 PM

Gideon had been saving it up for weeks!!!

That man's stamina is out of this world! 



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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:55 PM

You crack me up. I guessed 6 out of 23-felt like a lot to me ;D

 

Some of those chapters involved them simply getting going .... like in the bathtub .... and then leaving the rest to our imaginations. Others involved very long, tender and HAWT encounters.



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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:56 PM

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I went back over Eva/Gideon's timeline to figure out the timing for where Corrine's timing figured in ....

From the Monday evening that Eva and Gideon met in the Crossfire lobby to the Thursday evening that Entwined wrapped up, 59 days passed - about two months, -- eight and a half weeks.

"Four months pregnant" meaning in the fourth month could cover anything from the start of week 12 to the end of week 16. For this example, I'm going to go with the low end -- 12 weeks -- because Corrine, who was a slender woman, was not yet showing.

If these numbers work, then:

  • Corrine would have been around 4-5 weeks along when Gideon met Eva. Corrine learned about Eva's existence on day 6 (the night of the advocacy center dinner, when Gideon talked to Corrine after the date-gone-badly was over.) It's possible she didn't yet know she was pregnant.
  • It was day 17 that Corrine became desperate enough to crash the fundraiser where she started chasing Gideon in person in New York. So we're talking 6-7 weeks along, in her second month. Perhaps she did know by then, and that's why she threw all caution to the wind to try to get Gideon back as quickly as possible. This was around the time, too, if she became Dr. Anne Lucas' patient, so I'm actually going to give Corrine the benefit of the doubt.
  • Day 28 is when Gideon started "dating" Corrine again. She's definitely 8+ weeks along now. She had to have known by then she was pregnant, I believe. If she knew exactly how far along she was, she knew she needed to seduce Gideon as soon as possible to trap him into marrying her while she was still pregnant, passing off the child as his and by the time the baby was born "too early" they'd already be married, and no way would Gideon throw her out to raise a child alone. .
  • Somewhere between day 42 and 44 is when Gideon cut Corrine off. She was now in definitely somewhere into her third month, and having failed to seduce Gideon by now, it's already too late to simply get him into bed and then trick him that he'd knocked her up the very first time. She'd start showing soon, so there's no way he would buy her being newly-pregnant.
  • Day 57 is when Corrine took the pills.

But surely with modern technology, Corinne cant truly have believed she could convince Gideon the baby was his long enough to get him up the aisle?
Gideon NEEDS control. Corinne knows him enough to know that. He is without doubt the type of man who would insist on attending ultrasounds/scans to check on the health of his child.
Now, while he might have done the honourable thing and proposed when she announced she was pregnant, Corinne would have been hard pushed to stop Gideon attending the ultrasounds not to mention, get a divorce and Gideon up the aisle before the baby made an early appearance.
I know she was desperate but you dont scheme like Corinne does especially about something this complicated without realising the pitfalls of the plan, and some of these are almost insurmountable.
Gideon is far too thorough about checking facts and if Corinne were to announce she were pregnant after 1 night together, he would want proof of the estimated conception date from a doctor.

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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:57 PM

<p>

I went back over Eva/Gideon's timeline to figure out the timing for where Corrine's timing figured in ....

From the Monday evening that Eva and Gideon met in the Crossfire lobby to the Thursday evening that Entwined wrapped up, 59 days passed - about two months, -- eight and a half weeks.

"Four months pregnant" meaning in the fourth month could cover anything from the start of week 12 to the end of week 16. For this example, I'm going to go with the low end -- 12 weeks -- because Corrine, who was a slender woman, was not yet showing.

If these numbers work, then:

  • Corrine would have been around 4-5 weeks along when Gideon met Eva. Corrine learned about Eva's existence on day 6 (the night of the advocacy center dinner, when Gideon talked to Corrine after the date-gone-badly was over.) It's possible she didn't yet know she was pregnant.
  • It was day 17 that Corrine became desperate enough to crash the fundraiser where she started chasing Gideon in person in New York. So we're talking 6-7 weeks along, in her second month. Perhaps she did know by then, and that's why she threw all caution to the wind to try to get Gideon back as quickly as possible. This was around the time, too, if she became Dr. Anne Lucas' patient, so I'm actually going to give Corrine the benefit of the doubt.
  • Day 28 is when Gideon started "dating" Corrine again. She's definitely 8+ weeks along now. She had to have known by then she was pregnant, I believe. If she knew exactly how far along she was, she knew she needed to seduce Gideon as soon as possible to trap him into marrying her while she was still pregnant, passing off the child as his and by the time the baby was born "too early" they'd already be married, and no way would Gideon throw her out to raise a child alone. .
  • Somewhere between day 42 and 44 is when Gideon cut Corrine off. She was now in definitely somewhere into her third month, and having failed to seduce Gideon by now, it's already too late to simply get him into bed and then trick him that he'd knocked her up the very first time. She'd start showing soon, so there's no way he would buy her being newly-pregnant.
  • Day 57 is when Corrine took the pills.

But surely with modern technology, Corinne cant truly have believed she could convince Gideon the baby was his long enough to get him up the aisle?
Gideon NEEDS control. Corinne knows him enough to know that. He is without doubt the type of man who would insist on attending ultrasounds/scans to check on the health of his child.
Now, while he might have done the honourable thing and proposed when she announced she was pregnant, Corinne would have been hard pushed to stop Gideon attending the ultrasounds not to mention, get a divorce and Gideon up the aisle before the baby made an early appearance.
I know she was desperate but you dont scheme like Corinne does especially about something this complicated without realising the pitfalls of the plan, and some of these are almost insurmountable.
Gideon is far too thorough about checking facts and if Corinne were to announce she were pregnant after 1 night together, he would want proof of the estimated conception date from a doctor.

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Posted 08 June 2013 - 12:57 PM

Um, not yet .... honestly, I think the time I just spent figuring out the timeline of Corrine's pregnancy could have been better spent with Gideon/Eva sexy time counting. Soooooo
 
Chapter
1 - foreplay
2 - sex
3 - sex
4 - nope
5 - sex
6 - sex
7 - sex
8 - sex
9 - nightclub sex ;)
10 - nope
11 - nope
12 - sex
13 - nope
14 - nope
15 - sex
16 - nope
17 - sex
18 - plane sex (oh baby)
19 - sex
20 - married sex in the office (so hot)
21 - nope
22 - sex
23 - end with a kiss that's going somewhere ....
 
So 14 out of 22 chapters.

That's one he l l of a lot of make up sex. You rock!! Gideon




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